Have you been able to get serious objective criticism, not editing, not reviews?(Bashful) A couple of respected authors have sent me honest reviews on my work. One told me they reviewed my work because I didn't have a thin skin and didn't take offense at the suggestions.I am very grateful to anyone who writes an honest, detailed review and I write back and thank them. One review of an early story was worded "weird" I did not respond to that one.(Syela) Do you think there's a place in this genre for more objective criticism? I can understand the need for the supportive environment, but sometimes it becomes cloying.(Bashful) Of course, it is vitally important to be forthright about your views. The first review I got was about my very bad formatting and the three page long paragraphs of my first story.If I had gotten hurt feelings I would have quit there. I rewrote that story later, but corrected the mistake in future stories. You have to get honest reviews and you have to listen to. "Whatcha bite me for?" I didn't mean to. A bug crawled on my leg and it scared me. Sorry!" Well, don't do it again," David fusses. He holds his cock worrying, "Is it bleeding? Any marks?"Kimmi grabs his cock from his hand and eyeballs it closely. "It's fine. Just a little bite. Goodness, you are kinda being a pussy about a little bite." A little bi- ... oh, nevermind!"Distracted from her task, she notices his hanging balls. Jiggling them in her hand she asks, "Do I need to do anything with these things?"She gives one a hard squeeze and he yells, "No! Kimmi, just leave them alone. You are having enough trouble just getting through a cock sucking."She continues to fondle his balls, giggling."Christ, Kimmi! Now listen... this is important. Never, and I mean never, laugh when a guys shorts are down." She frowns at him and then inhales his cock again, determined to do better. She practices sliding him further into her throat. "Oh, fuck," he pants.She looks up at him and David pats her head.
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